story was really great. One of best story I've read till now. Character's love life was well explained and i am glad everyone's story was short and simple(not really) đ but it wasn't like clichĂ© novel where author stretch story to way longer than anyone can imagine. While reading i was thinking zhand zhehan is the male lead (which he was) but when long xun came in the picture i started to feel he's the male lead đ€ . whenever arguement happen characters will start to scream yell etc etc . once i start reading i becam addicted to what the hell isgoing to happen next and all but i am very disappointed to share that there wasn't only grammatical error but a lot words were written wrong that gave a headache , that was the big turn off for me but i read because of story. Author need to check all these mistakes because there weren't few , there were a lot of mistake but i appreciate your story it was short andsimple and on point. Except those mistake everything about story was interesting from long xun to feng xi. Thank you for your hard work author keep it up.
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