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Review Detail of MagikLord in Demiworld: Laum

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MagikLord
MagikLordLv44yrMagikLord

Unique writing style for this site. Not a bad start, but at the beginning of the first chapter I wanted to quit. Now I want to read something diferent. I will read this later.

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Demiworld: Laum

Orike

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Orike
OrikeAuthorOrike

Thank you.i am just a new author, who just started writing recently. I know my writing is fall flaws but I hope you guys will have some consideration about my writing while I am trying to improve.