Review Detail of Eddicted in Legend of Aurum
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Author buddy i think you should stop writing this novel too and try improving your writng skills and logic even more.the charecters of the people are too shallow, almost one dimensional.and if there are immortals in that world this idiot selling things like cleansing elixir as a weakling will only result in those immortals kidnapping him,torturing him,getting info from him,then finally dissecting his brain to look for abnormalities.and your world background is terrible.i hope you can atleast reach the minimum standards of a proper author by the time of your next novel if you dont give up by then.Goodluck.
Legend of Aurum
ArcaneDragon
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Thanks for your opinion. I cannot promise that in near future it will be improved to the level that you will enjoy. The story will be edited multiple times. I decided to first write some kind of skeleton and then make a break to flesh it out. Yes, I should just write it and edit and then publish it. I needed someone to help out with this procedure as I lack experience. So reviews and comments will help me, understand what is lacking and so on. You are talking about minimum standards of the proper author, I will reach it someday and show you my work by then. I wonder if you go from work to work and leave reviews about not reaching these standards. Ok, thank you for your attention.
Yeah i do read many new works here and leave reviews.most of these novels are dissappointing.but there are also very good and promising ones like archaic system(unstable release though).i am looking forward to your improved novel and hoping that i can add it to my list of good novels.goodluck
ArcaneDragon:Thanks for your opinion. I cannot promise that in near future it will be improved to the level that you will enjoy. The story will be edited multiple times. I decided to first write some kind of skeleton and then make a break to flesh it out. Yes, I should just write it and edit and then publish it. I needed someone to help out with this procedure as I lack experience. So reviews and comments will help me, understand what is lacking and so on. You are talking about minimum standards of the proper author, I will reach it someday and show you my work by then. I wonder if you go from work to work and leave reviews about not reaching these standards. Ok, thank you for your attention.