Review Detail of XOMatsumaeohana in The CEO's Painted Skin

With a title like this, I wasn't expecting smut. I was going to break this review down on writing Quality etc. But I need to point out a flaw in this plot. I don't see what the two have as romance right now. Instead, all I see is 'lust' and 'desire.' that's a common theme that's found on WN. So that's fine. But I don't think Caroline or John realize that there are no actual feelings of 'love' Maybe you can add this in and in the future a more genuine romance can be built between them. Writing Quality: There's a few issued, but nothing that can't be fixed with a writing program like Grammarly or prowriting aid. Character Design: Contrary to the present plot line, the characters are developed - though John's story is still vague for now. I'm guessing this was done deliberately. We learn a lot about Caroline's situation from the very beginning. So it's easy to understand what sort of personality she has Story Development: Right now I'm unsure of where the plot is going. But I'm guessing John will chose to go after her and Caroline will think more about her feelings for John. Or maybe they could spend much longer apart from each other. You could have them meet again when they are much older, maybe a year time skip? Overall: This is my first time reading this type of story. I hope I was able to give you some good advice. And keep up the good work!!