Review Detail of EnderPL in Undying Will

To put this review into perspective, 1) though the overpowered tag exists for a reason, under no scenario can one expect a ten year old however mature to go against doflamingo, who for the reviewer above is a figure luffy (the mc of the actual story) only faces in the new world era and still barely defeats. It is not much of an understatement to say the man is only slightly weaker then katakuri who might I remind all those aware of canon is a sweat commander. 2) though the main character is indeed like thirty forty years old, he isn't a one piece fan in the sense that he knows the story. He knows most of the main important figures though he doesn't know much of their life story or how they are portrayed in the story. He is but a person who fell in love with the worldbuilding of the story with knowledge of a few figures like Roger and whitebeard. 3) To address his immediate trust of sorren, unfortunately I must indeed agree with the reviewer above that I leaned too much into the comic element and ruined the first interaction, though in my opinion it wasn't as bad as they have portrayed. True he was taken alight advantage of, but as a compound of my personal opinion and the opinion of a few people that I had helping me proof read at the very beginning of the story, I described everything in too much detail and therefore went into the rationale of each action with extreme scrutiny which most readers did not like. I was of the impression that on the premise of the charector I had established his actions would not be seen as blatant trust but more of an interest. 4) finally to address the update schedule and some miscellaneous things, I am a student who is heavily embroiled in loads of activities and such and therefore barely get enough time to write. When I do get such time it is often spent staring mindlessly at the word document or playing some pc games. So I am trying my hardest to churn out chapters, but for those that want releases once a day or more I am unable to cater to you for which I heavily apologize. Some additional info on the novel as such is that the mc is highly sociopathic (though he has people that he cares about) and often childishly reckless only making decisions that he personally would not take at the wishes of his crew, who he considers one of the few people that can change his decisions. He was also mostly a shut in on earth and therefore severely lacks most life skills. What he does know has been hammered into him through his senpai and also, he is one of the most realistic charector I have written because of f how nuanced he is along with the heaps of hypocrisy!!

Thanks for the reply. Well I do not agree but everyone has rights to their own opinion. From what you said then Bartolomeo son was like what 14 when he defeated that bird. I do not know one piece so explaining to me the power lvl is useless. I only know that Mc should be op as per the tag. You made him train with the most powerful pirates in a hell like training and he is weaker than his first mate? Second thing why are you calling his teacher senpai? 3rd thing, when he was reincarnated your wrote that he knew one piece as the back of his hand or something similar. Next, I know there is comedy tag but the way it was implemented was forced and totally destroyed the great atmosphere the story had going on. There was more things but I’m just too lazy to write about. Good luck with the story.