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Doishi
DoishiLv55yr
2019-06-09 18:17

I love attack on titan and when I saw it here i clicked on it immediately. I'm not going to say I'm disappointed because on this app, especially with original stories, they are bad. That doesn't mean that it can't improve. You can go ahead and read if you want but for those who are picky or the grammar police, turn around NOW. That is the biggest issue for me as it ruins the whole story for me. I will be coming back to check on the newer chapters sometime in the future though so this may change. I can't really say much because I tried writing a story once but I didnt really know how to much it into words much and describe the environment. I could have continued but my standards didnt allow me so props on this author for continuing and I hope they improve.

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Doragon
DoragonAuthor

Thanks for your honest review. Yes you're right, my grammar skills are currently bad. I can't say if had improved in the last few months while writing but for sure I am trying always to improve my grammar skills. Thanks for reading.

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