Review Detail of Kurama_is_tsundere in ROZ

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Rating: 5

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Kurama_is_tsundereLv65yrKurama_is_tsundere

A great start to this apocalypse novel. Need more chapters. Quality is great negligible grammar mistakes also world building was done beautiful would recommend to all my friends keep up the great work and please try to make regular updates on the chapters.

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Clou_d

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Clou_dAuthorClou_d

Thanks and I'm still struggling to learn how to write in my meager time. Hope you could point out when the novel loses its flow.

5yr

Kurama_is_tsundereLv6Kurama_is_tsundere

Well i would say that you need to show his cultivation part. He needs to grow stronger. The pace is ok but establish stages or levels of strength. Other than that it just needs more chapters as people usually like to binge read the 1st 20-25 chapters so try to release more of them. Also try to release regularly on a fixed time. People like that in an author. Ps. Really loved your work don't drop it please. I love apocalypse novels, looking forward to more chapters. 😁👍

Clou_d:Thanks and I'm still struggling to learn how to write in my meager time. Hope you could point out when the novel loses its flow.

5yr

Clou_dAuthorClou_d

https://forum.webnovel.com/d/17409-rise-of-zion-an-apocalyptic-novel Please visit the forum and let me know the improvements the novel could make.

5yr