A very good novel with an interesting plot. To start off, the chapters have some beautiful descriptions along with intriguing characters and plot. The character (Mc mostly) is very well thought out and the story has a good flow and pace. The few problems that the novel has is mostly due to English not being the author’s language (I think I read that somewhere) like how some words that need to be in the past tense are in the present. And some sentences have commas, punctuation marks, and words placed in the wrong places. There were some small grammatical errors, that didn’t really disrupt the story in any way, as well. The novel is still a bit new so there isn’t much in world background yet, but I believe it is definitely adding on every chapter. The update seems to be quite stable with a chapter a day and the story development is very interring so far. I look forward to the future chapters and I wish the author the best of luck!❤️❣️❤️
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