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Flying_Dreams
Flying_DreamsLv115yr
2019-02-01 01:17

The story is delightful, doesn't have cliches and very humorous. The descriptions are beautifully written bringing the characters as well as the surroundings to reality. I have a feeling of walking on a mystical and mysterious journey with Witch Zanthia while she daydreams and kills people one at a time. I especially loved the horror prescribed for evil younger sisters. Would like to get some!

Witch Zanthia´s Little Shop of Horrors

GabrielDetchans
4.5
21 Chs

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GabrielDetchans
GabrielDetchansAuthor

Hi! I am the author and of course I am shamelessly promoting my work in here. It is a romance story with comedic relief in a not so typical shop owner setting with some interesting and fun characters. This is my first try at this and and I am not a native speaker of the English language so sorry for the possible mistakes I made. I hope you like it . Thanks for reading!

6yr

Moiraine
MoiraineLv4

I love how much detail is in every description, and the whimsical and teasing nature of the character's relationships. Though I must admit that I'm biased towards this because I really like stories about witches and cats.

6yr
DaintyTeapot
DaintyTeapotLv4

If you're thinking of reading this, you definitely should. It's a really cute story about a young witch and her three cats running a store together. There is mystery, room for romance, and face-slapping. The writing quality is great, with just a few minor errors. Although the chapter number is low, that is more than made up for by the chapter length. As I said, if you're hesitating, just read it already!

6yr
fantasy_land
fantasy_landLv5

Loved this story. I have to say.. this is first kind of novel that I am reading. It's hilarious and tickles the funny bone. Just love the characters and the world design in which the plot is situated. Continue the great work 👍 PS you have a new reader, that's me 😃

6yr
half_empty
half_emptyLv15

The only thing I marked down was writing quality, but the author has mentioned that English isn’t his first language. He has very few mistakes that you would barely notice, unless you were looking for them. Other than that, everything is great and it has a wonderful start! The world background and character development is very A++, and he releases a chapter every three days! Give the novel a try!

6yr
Idare
IdareLv4

can’t say much but more updates so i understand the story more and this also has a promising idea of what i think is something like. system story? anyway goodluck

6yr
Yozuka
YozukaLv11

Writing Quality: Top notch. Couldn't spot any mistakes in spelling or grammar (as far as my non-native knowledge would let me spot them, anyways.) Stability of Updates: Can't really make out a Update Schedule, so 3 stars. Story Development: It's interesting and really funny so far! Character Design: Loveable and lifelike, nothing much to say here! World Background: Really interesting and leaves you wanting to know more.

6yr
NatsumeRikka
NatsumeRikkaLv5

I haven't finished reading it, but I already like it a lot. P. S Zanthia is too cute, nyaa~😼 😼. Looking forward to read more chapters. I'm hesitant to read more though, I'll be left hanging when I reach ch 14 and will have to wait for updates impatiently. The Absolute Torture!!! Worth it though.

6yr
Nike2015
Nike2015Lv3

Is great! I love the story and I love the cats! Little Sun is hilarious! They are all very lovely!!!. The witch is very sexy and funny. I want more cats.

6yr
AzraelWriterdom
AzraelWriterdomLv3

I like it very much. I laughed a lot while reading it. The chapters are longer than the usual on this site. The writing quality is ok, the stability of updates is somewhat regular for now and the story development has a clear direction. The design of the charaters is deep enough to feel credible and yet, very funny in a bizarre kind of way. The world background could use some work, some references are too vague but thas ok since there are only 5 chapters for now and maybe the world will grow with more chapters. All things considered, it is a good begining and it has potential!

6yr
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