Review Detail of Culture_Lover in After training for 1,000 years, it's time for me to collect my harem

thank you for the review, I won't defend what you thought about Kuroinu's world circumstance and how I write Kaguya, but I have to fix your wrong conclusion in the fight between MC and Volt, first, Volt enter the mode of Anubis' Curse, which rose all of his attributes, and made him super regenerative, then he got the boost from Olga's dark art, furthering enchant his regeneration, then he got buff with Keanu's enchantment, imagine Naruto, needs sage mode and chakra mode, those two what they needed to beat the MC, while MC just fight with what he have, if you still call that weak, I have no words for you.

oh, and I really don't like rape, that's why it's done by the ENEMIES, not by the MC, and what MC did? Kill them.

If you don't like rape, why the **** did you choose this world? And why the **** do you know this world more?

because I can make mc kill them?

wtf? what does it have to do with it? I said, "If you don't like rape, why did you choose this world?" and "if you hate rape so much, how did you know about this world?" What the **** is the difference he kills or not, they've already been raped, he won't help. (Google translate)

'you hate rape, why you chose this world?' because I can make the mc kill the rapists, which part doesn't make any sense? 'why do you know so much?' research, just like what other people do.

"There are rapists in all worlds." "Usually people, if they hate something, they do not investigate it. "

not if you are an author or screen writer, if you don't research anything, how should you write a story?

🤣🤣🤣this literally makes no sense, good thing i got warned tho

I agree that kuroinu world was a bad choice, especially since author could've added some condition to make mc appear sooner and properly save them, but idl about you, but when I hate something I make sure to properly investigate it, to either avoid it better, protect against it better, understand why it happens, etc. Basically just to counteract or avoid it if possible

Oh...Dear Mr.author, if we consider the fact that your other novel Qingming college and the translation of nine yang sword saint are what you like then I can say that you love to see how the MC get to save or steal the women from another antagonist and you don't like to write about the fluffy world of maidens but the dark and disgusting world of those women who treated as meat holes and how the MC save them but you shouldn't use a hentai world for that...first the women their barely have any personality and other than the fact that they used to act a subject to the humiliation and raping then they have nothing other than their good body...second you can use them as a template for an original character with true individuality instead of just meat to ****...third that world (kuroinu or whatever) is not even a complete world just some third rate world with nothing than women to be raped and men to rape them so what is the use of something like this...fourth depending on how much the other hate your MC personality in this world then I can say that you made some dead-brain-seeking-justic MC and this really unbelievable...I mean you need a bright world for someone like him and the fact he lives more 1000 years before realising that he is cheated tell us more than necessary to understand how brilliant he is... anyway my suggestion is to rewrite the whole novel with a mix of original characters and fanfiction characters but with original worlds form your imagination(chose world with good buildup then mix them and make a new world for your novel). and if you are not going to do this then at least remove the second world and replace it with something worth reading.

Yo, bro That's why it was a FanFiction the author can add or delete things in this story, how can you say that there is nothing in that world (kuroinu), I say it is even better if there is nothing in that world, because the author can always choose to add things that could make it more interesting. In a FanFic if you already saw the ending of Kuroinu's hentai/VN or whatever story/world you read it doesn't mean that's all there is to it, in FanFic the author can remove things that made the story unsatisfactory to whoever read or watched it. Such as in the kuroinu world what happened is much more satisfactory compared to the original hentai/VN. And, the next plot for kuroinu was already LAID OUT flatly, and it will not become a world filled with f*ckery the next time the MC come back THERE again. And who would not become mad after seeing the carnage of F*CKERY that was happening and you labeled it as justice seeking it was not even a justice, from what I know it was more like a judgement than a jush*t. I got an advice for you think, think about the time when you watched Kuroinu for the first time, remember about what did you feel at that time? (nevermind if you felt fapping on it) for me what the author wrote is what I want to happen to those piece of sh*t when I watched it for the first time.

I don't know what are you guys thinking, you've watched the hentai which was horrible and disgusting to watch, while this FanFic is waaay better than the hentai and you hated it, come on guys get your thoughts and mind checked. I just can't wait how he would deal with the gods of every world, chaos and the autho- I mean Jac

...Hi, there. I don't watch it until I see all these negative opinions and want to understand if it's horrible like what they said and truthfully there is nothing to make fanfiction from it other than the female characters because this the only thing that you would like about it...also most Hentai Animation doesn't have a reasonable plot to make a complete story unlike the Hentai Manga so choosing this world is the wrong move because he was trying to patch this crumpled world for no reason, which is waste of effort. After all, if he wants to add any of them to the MC's Harem then he can simply merge few fantasies world and make a whole new world and just add the hentai as a small part of it instead of making it the centre of the world. so that it....what do you think?

sorry about that, yeah you are pretty accurate with your point here, but I doubt that the only interesting thing here was the female characters as you said, because the author already added some plot there (kuroinu world) and I think it will become pretty similar with the fairy tail. But, I think you are really right about that after killing volt I can't think of anything that the MC would/could do in that world other than s*x. It felt boring and lackluster because the next villain or the mastermind behind the carnage was not fleshed out and introduce properly that it made us readers felt loss of what the MC gonna do next. What made me actually interested here is on how the author gonna make it interesting, it just triggered me that people already hatin on the process while it is still being slowly peeled, the author is like "slowly peeling the pineapple and there is his cute little puppy biting it while it is still partly peeled" and guess what they started hating the author and then the pineapple.

when I said "that the only thing of interest is the female characters" I was talking about the original hentai, not the second world, and most people hated how he acted inside the second world not the dark theme because the Author make the MC very hypocritical and mostly because a rapping bastard is not worthy of anything other than killing him in the most humiliating way instead of making him an antagonist that makes the MC have a hard time to kill him. (it is all about how unworthy this group of disgusting humans and non-humans to make them as villains, for example, if the author made the MC go to this world before the timeline of the original canon and maybe save the dark elf queen before her miserable fate and after some drama, he simply destroyed them completely then you will find very few people who criticize this volume.) Hope this cleared my point of view. and thanks for replying.

It is not about whether we have seen worse things, what I criticize is the silly way of the development of that world, there are better ff, like Long_chinchin (I an in kuroinu?)

I littely avoid this ff after seeing this world

the author is rewriting the kuroinu arc, I will delete this comment once the rewriting is done, hope it is better than the previous one