Review Detail of chonnie in My brother's friend
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Read till Chapter 7- This novel is well written compared to a lot of other novels here on WN. There's suitable detail in the events taking place. Sometimes I was thinking that there were better ways to word some sentences to get the meaning across clearer, but all the author needs is maybe a proof/beta reader to help. Just a complaint on my end, all caps imo don't look very nice in something you're publishing. Of course, that's just me lmao. If you're interested in modern day romances, this one is well done. With seven chapters, I can't say I'm in love with the characters, but they aren't horrible caricatures of common tropes. Hopefully there's more developmemt within the next chapters. Good luck to the author!
My brother's friend
Nzoputa
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Oh! So in the first chapter, you have the name of a restaurant in all caps. Instead of doing that you can use '(name' or italics if we one day get that feature. It's super minor tho and a personal thing so don't worry about it!
Nzoputa:But I don't understand what you mean by 'all caps imo don't look nice'. Please can you explain.
Oh now I get it, Ok I'll fix that up. Thanks again, c8 is out, so you can read it and tell me some more suggestions.
chonnie:Oh! So in the first chapter, you have the name of a restaurant in all caps. Instead of doing that you can use '(name' or italics if we one day get that feature. It's super minor tho and a personal thing so don't worry about it!