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cloudguguLv45yrcloudgugu

This was kinda like a mellow story to me. Since there were only few chapters, there were not much notable scene. Still, I love when the author portray the love at first sight from the male pov (🤔 ). Writing quality was good for me coz the author had much better comprehension of grammar compared to myself😅. Self assessment.😂 For the updates, many were complaining but the author had taken the initiative to clarify the issue. So, all is well. The story hasn't developed much, maybe due to the number of chapter posted. Therefore, the character develooment is still lacking but reader can already make few assumptions on what kind of characters the FL and ML will be. At least, I have some sorts of idea. I hope to see more in future. Overall, I enjoy this novel. Keep writing!😊

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My brother's friend

Nzoputa

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Nzoputa
NzoputaAuthorNzoputa

Hi thanks for the review, what are these ideas you mentioned above, I'd like to know so I can improve on it. I'd love to hear your thoughts on it and what you can suggest.

cloudgugu
cloudguguLv4cloudgugu

Oh, I mean that I kinda understood the characters in your story, but since there were only few chapters posted, they were still cloudy.. Hence i was hoping to know more of their lifestory as to understand who and what kind of character they are. Which also mean that I'm hoping for some more release of chapters😊😅

Nzoputa
NzoputaAuthorNzoputa

OK, then, more chapters coming up. So glad you like my story and are showing interest. Thanks.

cloudgugu:Oh, I mean that I kinda understood the characters in your story, but since there were only few chapters posted, they were still cloudy.. Hence i was hoping to know more of their lifestory as to understand who and what kind of character they are. Which also mean that I'm hoping for some more release of chapters😊😅
cloudgugu
cloudguguLv4cloudgugu

You're welcome 😊

Nzoputa
NzoputaAuthorNzoputa

Hi just posted a new chapter, was wondering if you'd like to check it out.

cloudgugu
cloudguguLv4cloudgugu

Checked! I love it😊