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Item: My brother's friend
Rating: 4.2

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Sapphirechelsea237Lv45yrSapphirechelsea237

The writing style is great as well as the length of the chapters. The story is getting interesting!!! My only advice is to break up the paragraphs in the first chapters a bit. Otherwise everything is pretty good! Keep writing! :D

My brother's friend

Nzoputa

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NzoputaAuthorNzoputa

thanks for the review, I'll work on my faults ;]

5yr

NzoputaAuthorNzoputa

Hi just posted a new chapter, was wondering if you'd like to check it out.

4yr

Sapphirechelsea237Lv4Sapphirechelsea237

Sure, though not right now, but soon! Exam pressure! :(

Nzoputa:Hi just posted a new chapter, was wondering if you'd like to check it out.

4yr

NzoputaAuthorNzoputa

Np I get it, I also have exams

Sapphirechelsea237:Sure, though not right now, but soon! Exam pressure! :(

4yr