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Damnnndelian96
Damnnndelian96Lv106yr
2019-03-22 01:05

The writing is extremely good. The past description is satisfying and there are so many fluffy scenes in the novel. The development of the story is perfect as it is neither too slow nor too fast. There is enough romance to the heart's content and the plot is no less good. It is heart warming, and I am looking forward to the next updates.

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crimson_carnation
crimson_carnationAuthor

Thank you for the wonderful review! (*^▽^*)/

Damnnndelian96
Damnnndelian96Lv10

Thank you... I really didn't expect to get a reply in it. Haapppyy

crimson_carnation:Thank you for the wonderful review! (*^▽^*)/
crimson_carnation
crimson_carnationAuthor

Well, I didn't expect such a nice review either! It was a pleasant surprise (๑^ ω ^๑)♡

Damnnndelian96:Thank you... I really didn't expect to get a reply in it. Haapppyy
Damnnndelian96
Damnnndelian96Lv10

The grammar is bad... Well first time does this to you I guess...

crimson_carnation:Well, I didn't expect such a nice review either! It was a pleasant surprise (๑^ ω ^๑)♡
Damnnndelian96
Damnnndelian96Lv10

I was not able to gift your book... I don't know why?

crimson_carnation:Well, I didn't expect such a nice review either! It was a pleasant surprise (๑^ ω ^๑)♡
crimson_carnation
crimson_carnationAuthor

It was actually quite good! There were times when my reviews ended up being full of spelling errors, but too bad I couldn't go back and edit them XD

Damnnndelian96:The grammar is bad... Well first time does this to you I guess...
crimson_carnation
crimson_carnationAuthor

It's because I don't have a contract :) From what I understand, only books that are contracted with this site can accept gifts.

Damnnndelian96:I was not able to gift your book... I don't know why?
Damnnndelian96
Damnnndelian96Lv10

Oh Well, I'll just vote it at every new chapter. And thank you. I appreciate it a lot.

crimson_carnation:It's because I don't have a contract :) From what I understand, only books that are contracted with this site can accept gifts.
crimson_carnation
crimson_carnationAuthor

You're very welcome! (*^ ω ^*)/

Damnnndelian96:Oh Well, I'll just vote it at every new chapter. And thank you. I appreciate it a lot.
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