At the beginning of the chapter 1, you are thrown with some really big words probably cause of the Iisekai setting. Avery as a character is very well rounded and the reason to come back to the story for more. At times, Alchemist is written as Alchenist, probably cause of n and m being very close in QWERTY keyboard. I wouldn't hope for new chapters - the author has a record of leaving most of stories unattended. But if it does come out, and gets completed, it surely deserves to be in the competition.
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