This story has great potential and it definitely stands out to me, since I haven't read many stories that focus on inherited villainy. Although I can still understand the writing, despite the many basic grammar errors (which I totally understand if English isn't your first language), there are also a lot of repeated phrases or wrong words than can easily be fixed with just editing your own work. Good effort!
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