Review Detail of AToastForADay in Unbridled

Hi! Review from the author. 1. Writing Quality - As my native language is not English so there would be mistakes in my grammars, terms or etc. but I'm trying to improve as well and if you spot any mistakes just comment in the paragraph of it as I'll see what I can do. 2. Story Development - The synopsis I wrote there is what I intended it to be. If you're reading it now and get confused what happened to the second volume and such, don't be flustered as you will know everything once you get to the third volume of the story. The story will be a bit slow-paced due to the mysteries that I crafted but you will surely understand once you continue reading. THIS STORY IS NOT JUST A SIMPLE STORY OF A BUTLER AND HIS MASTER. 3. Character Design - As there would be many characters included in the story and the MC will be meeting new ones as she travelled, don't get confused to their attitudes as some of them had similarities with each other. The MC is a dense person as well as the butler. And if you read this story, we don't have two MCs only one but they are somehow connected. 4. Updating Stability - Everyday, obviously. 5. World Background - The story is set in a Diverse Culture, so don't be confused with Chinese names, Japanese names or Korean ones and other unique names, too as they are made for each the continent they represented. Disclaimer: If you drop your review, please signify an understandable reason why did you rate it to be like this? What's the matter of the story and such... because I'll be reading it. And I don't entertain foul comments or harsh words anymore so suit yourself. So that's all, thank you! Have a nice toasty day!