English quality - id say maybe 3.5. its satisfactory but still has plenty of errors that needs to be cleaned up. Maybe a bit more proofreading and editing Story is good. Hopefully the infos wont just be left and forgotten later on The cultivation system needs a bit more explaining and detailing. Overall a satisfactory novel with a lot of potential
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