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Master_of_Ero_Path
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Honestly when I started reading this story I truly don't have hope or whatever for this story but, the more I read the more surprised me become. Now I think this story have a ton of potential and as well have big of potential to landslide. Why have alot potential?. First, I don't feel something off with the pace of story(the latest is 7th chap). Second, the story have deep background enough( mainly about the clarity of the MC power) to keep more chapters that doesn't make something out of mind like forced plot armor, deep plot hole or something like that. Third,you can go to read the first original power ranking and compare to this story and I think more of you will think that this story have potential to steady go upside as long as the author can handle the threat of the big potential to landslide I said. I think what the threat is would be different from each perspective of the reader but, I belive there would be more of the common thing. That threat in my view is of course start from the inconsistence of the update and then to the lucy/system (Author really have to fix this,why a sistem can blushing?,or etc) and the path that the story would take. For example, the amount of harem that MC would take, out of all the novel I has read(ero of course) none of them can be considered succes in harem(not whole story) when they take really alot of harem even when their background is clear. Why?, Then I would give example nah, "soul exchange program" is one of them. initially this story is really marvelous even in harem because the author take alot to build the first few character of the harem, exactly 7 character. Then the amount is slowly increased but the story is still well controlled because of the detail author give. While the author never satisfied and the amount keep more and more incresed, the detail about each character start to simplified because is imposible to discard the already harem to only make new harem, one of it because the plot need the already harem to continues. Starting then alot of previously readers start to comment: who is she?,who is her?,who is that women?. Alot of that when the alredy exist harem that started appearing again, that because not enough impresion and background for the readers and the story plot is really messed. This is not wuxia story like ATG that can leave the part of harem and send the other to elsewhere. Now the strory has already long hiatus. Why I write this is because I like this story and hope can continues with good reputation. Fortunately the story already keep decent start because the divided marks;wife,personal servant,servant. This surely would be different if don't have this, normal MC that have alot girlfriend is different from king who have alot women, you can easily simplified the harem king have like main wife 1 to 3 who have many major plot with mc, concubine 1 to 9 who sometime have plot with mc and some personal servant that have light plot just to entertain the King. From now on I think I will keep daily vote and support for this story as long the story keep promising. Best wishes for all of us, ALL HAILL TO ERONESS!!!!. lmaošŸ¤£

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MavisKazuha
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I am very grateful for your review. here, I will also explain the problem about Lucy being able to blush or etc. Actually, this can also be a spoiler. because you have asked, I will answer it. In chapter 3, I wrote that after the Library of Heaven's Path joined Customize Creator, then the Library of Heaven's Path have "awareness", right? well, basically the Library of Heaven's Path is a library, how can a library have awareness? that would be very unrealistic. It will be different if a library has awareness because there is a spirit that inhabits the library. So, what I mean by "awareness" is "spirit". And the spirit (Lucy) in this novel has a form / body, since Qing Tian chose gender for Lucy. I made it like World spirit from Asura Martial God. And in chapter 7, I wrote that Lucy didn't want a body and only wanted a present from Qing Tian after Qing Tian reached the Spirit Realm, right? that's because Lucy already has her own body. and for them to meet each other, Qing Tian must reach Spirit Realm. once again, I thank you for your review, and I also apologize for your confusion. I will try to explain it in the next chapter.

Master_of_Ero_Path
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Ho ho so it's that wayšŸ˜‚. Good luck for you author, I hope this story can keep promising because I believe threre would be alot of readers who surely like this story as long as you can keep slowly improving. Of course the majority of them would be brother daoist who embark in the perv***ness path,hen***sm, as well my brother who embark in same path of mešŸ˜‚. But if you can describe well the fight and about cultivation(my mean is some small type,plot,characteristic,etc like wuxia) there would be alot of readers too who doesn't really care about *cough* the blisness of the world. ALL HAILL TO ERONESS, lol

MavisKazuha:I am very grateful for your review. here, I will also explain the problem about Lucy being able to blush or etc. Actually, this can also be a spoiler. because you have asked, I will answer it. In chapter 3, I wrote that after the Library of Heaven's Path joined Customize Creator, then the Library of Heaven's Path have "awareness", right? well, basically the Library of Heaven's Path is a library, how can a library have awareness? that would be very unrealistic. It will be different if a library has awareness because there is a spirit that inhabits the library. So, what I mean by "awareness" is "spirit". And the spirit (Lucy) in this novel has a form / body, since Qing Tian chose gender for Lucy. I made it like World spirit from Asura Martial God. And in chapter 7, I wrote that Lucy didn't want a body and only wanted a present from Qing Tian after Qing Tian reached the Spirit Realm, right? that's because Lucy already has her own body. and for them to meet each other, Qing Tian must reach Spirit Realm. once again, I thank you for your review, and I also apologize for your confusion. I will try to explain it in the next chapter.
Master_of_Ero_Path
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Honestly in the chapter 3 I surprised that the body MC take is not the native, like a disciple of spring blossom sect instead is from same world with the MC. I hope the plot will be betteršŸ˜Œ

MavisKazuha
MavisKazuhaAuthorMavisKazuha

Actually I want to explain about this problem. But after you warned me last time, I chose to keep quiet for now hahaha ..

Master_of_Ero_Path:Honestly in the chapter 3 I surprised that the body MC take is not the native, like a disciple of spring blossom sect instead is from same world with the MC. I hope the plot will be betteršŸ˜Œ
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