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DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv142yrDetachedDreamer

its a decent story with a fun concept but there are a few flaws. MOST of the dialogue is the MC spouting nonsense lies and the other characters easily believing him, he has multiple templates to change appearances to help his lies. he explains why he lies but it makes most of what you read pointless to the actual development of the story. the marvel characters he has join him lose any original personality they had and become slav.. loyal companions. Jessica is an albedo type. if you don't mind that then its not bad to read. oh yeah, you'll want to skip the chapter where he lies to the ancient one. its so poorly written and the lies used so bad that it'll make you question reading further.

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Marvel With Zanpakutou

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The_Anonymous_User
The_Anonymous_UserLv4The_Anonymous_User

is this harem? or romance?

funmaxwell
funmaxwellLv13funmaxwell

it's a reverse harem.

The_Anonymous_User:is this harem? or romance?
DaoistTranslator
DaoistTranslatorLv13DaoistTranslator

No thanks!

funmaxwell:it's a reverse harem.
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