Review Detail of JA_Anton in Assassins Rebellion

I am assuming that this is still in the early drafts as I've noticed some typos and other grammar errors that could have easily been checked through rereading. Writing-wise, the author prefers a direct exposition style which I think is good for stories with a lot of actions such as this. However, there are some instances where the author is already telling not showing. Perhaps, adding more descriptions or rewording some phrases may help. I think the author should also try experimenting on different sentence structures to make the actions scenes more realistic, and to improve the flow of the narrative. (Please check your comment section. I've noted the grammar issues I've mentioned and also some other notes.) For the characters, the main character, Kaylah, seems to be a likable kickass female lead. The concepts of thieves and assassins also managed to introduced the novel's 'setting' a bit though there really isn't much to comment on. To be fair, only the first two chapters have been posted so there really isn't much to critique. Overall, I think the plot of the novel is really intriguing. I look forward to how the story will develop.