Item: Gods Of Misfortune
Rating: 4

blondepredatorLv35yr

2018-12-06 15:39

if it weren't for your punctuation I'd now think you were a professional. The new covers epic and i'm glad you changed the title this one feels more accurate. PLus I can finally picture Celeste, that is her right? Just keep this going, its a rare type in this site, kinda like a game of thrones now, for my nitpicking. The story isn't rushed and we finally know the endgame but dear god add some life into that dragonxfaerie bit I know they are your cookie cutter couple but they are the main one and compared to the others they aren't nearly as fun, look at Celeste and Barius they are awesome! And you'll probably put Death and the Prince in a relationship that I'm looking forward to. So yeah some much-needed life for the dragon and the faerie, I feel like they could leave the story and it wouldn't make much difference, make me want to see them. Not gonna lie your writing is a gift, keep this going when it's done you can sell it on Amazon or something, I'd buy it

Gods Of Misfortune

lazyredragon

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lazyredragonAuthor

Eeeep! Thank you!

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