Review Detail of XOMatsumaeohana in Tales of the Supremes

Review Swap Valid for Chapter 13 Writing Quality: The writing quality is decent, the story flows very well. Aside from a few grammar mistakes here and there. Which can be fixed by an editor or using writing programmes like grammarly. 🤔 though I do want to ask what's with the random brackets Example --> Chapter 13 (trouble that they themselves did) Story Development: In terms of pace, the start chapters went by quickly and there were a few occasions where I had to go back to re-read. But I've always liked face pace started stories - helps get rid of any confusion or questions that arises. Looking forward to seeing how the FL deals with the changes in her new life. Character Design: There's a lot of characters introduced in the begining chapters. Other than the FL the others background information haven't been explored yet. The FL Tala appears weak at the start of the novel, because of the memories of her past life. Her anguish and pain from her past life help build up her character in this new life. World Background: I had to re-read to make sure I read the transition properly. Even though it's a new world, some aspects of the old world still remain.