Review Detail of Chryiss in Tales of the Supremes

First of all, love the names! They add nice character to the story. Also, the wanting to go back to the human world premise is uncommonly seen. Usually the MC just skips right to “rebirth/arrival” in said world. Writing-wise, I saw little that bothered me. Overall, good. I did see some missing dialogue quotations, most notably in chapter 3. This is only chapter 5, so I can’t judge this story very well yet. At this point, Tala is just trying to go back to the human world and she craftily received the six feathers from the phoenix. In the last chapter, it seems like something else is starting to happen, but it’s unclear as it seems like not everything has been divulged yet.