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BrightDawn
BrightDawnAuthor5yr
2018-11-26 08:58

Shameless author here, I've been tasked with the oh so harsh task of reviewing my own novel; and for good reason too. Even with my desire have good reviews I won't lie; this novel at best is an almost 4. It was my very first work, before even my complete fanfiction and thus is (IMO) pretty bad at the start... Anyways, if by the time that I return to continue posting new content, this novel has a review score of say... 4.0 (plz no shameless exploits of novel review system plz), I'll continue updating for it in an effort to salvage the situation. Boop Beep, *robot noises for the win~*

Divinity Jam

BrightDawn
4.6
114 Chs

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Melshan
MelshanLv7

MC OP?

5yr
BrightDawn
BrightDawnAuthor

Very...

Melshan:MC OP?
5yr
Heaveah
HeaveahLv5

Harem? 😘😍

5yr
AardwarkThe2nd
AardwarkThe2ndLv5

An ultra-dense MC... it reminds me of Legend of the Cultivation God. MC is pretty dense in the TLed chapters while being cute AF. I'll put this in my reading list.

5yr
newthings
newthingsLv6

Dense till the end? and harem?

5yr
BrightDawn
BrightDawnAuthor

Probably not dense to the end, and the debate on harem or no harem is still raging on...

newthings:Dense till the end? and harem?
5yr
newthings
newthingsLv6

cultivation and harem always feels good XD, go for it

BrightDawn:Probably not dense to the end, and the debate on harem or no harem is still raging on...
5yr
Other Reviews
Atalkingrock
AtalkingrockLv14

This book is about a jar of jam that hides as a human in a cultivation world, and has an OP power that makes him super powerful. The author is misogynistic, transphobic, and has no respect for the hearts of jam bottles across the world. Overall I think this book deserved to be dropped, and the author should go commit eat McDonald's. (Read the authors last chap)

5yr

MIGHTGUY
MIGHTGUYLv10

Made 8 different accounts just to get u into 350s Just because u said harem never because harem is **** and will always be for lonely pedos that live in their mother basement thinking about how to rape the 8 year old next door

5yr
icyhail
icyhailLv10

The story is nice and all, but i must say that i can't help but feel cheated. That title made me think that the story was going to be about jams! Like blueberry jam, strawberry jam and so on

5yr
Kilian
KilianLv11

A fun and relatively lighthearted cultivation novel. It is similar to some aspects of the authors other published novel (Greater Than Gods: Chojusen) in that it features multiple dao's and an insanely talented MC. The English is good and there are no noticeable grammar errors. I would recommend this novel to anyone looking for a fun cultivation novel.

5yr
GODSLAYINGMAGE
GODSLAYINGMAGELv14

All good honestly don’t know any good ways to improve it beside fixing typos if any otherwise to me it’s perfect but please please NO HAREM I also can’t accurately rate update rate so ima rate 5 but that’s for now

5yr
KingSmall
KingSmallLv5

A fantastic story thus far. My favourite part is actually the author comments, I find them very amusing. I would love to see more of Jam being completely socially unaware and a little more of the technology in the world. Keep it up author!

5yr
Trevmo
TrevmoLv10

Really good novel! Its light hearted and fun to have a super op mc that keeps getting stronger and none of the cliche villains that are always just stronger than the mc making him power up to defeat the brother of Villan 1 or elder of villan 2. Super fun read, give it a try.

5yr
Browniebro
BrowniebroLv15

I NEED MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

5yr
Katheriner
KatherinerLv1

Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing

4yr
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