not much of an MJ fan. hope for spider-Gwen, black cat or Silk as the girlfriend. tired of saving or lying to a normal girl friend. seems like the new guy feels the same way I do.

nice to see that while he is not letting people walk all over him like the old Peter he is still good at heart. I wonder if he will go with the old spider suit or go with a high tech one. the suits from the **4 Spider-Man game was sweet.

Is this dropped please tell me this is not dropped it's really good. Also please dont make ie a Peter parker and mj I really dont like that match up. Marvel really should have let it be gween stacy or black cat. Anyway please come back to this also it's really good story please dont drop or come back

This book is a great redo of the spiderman we have grown up with, this spiderman changes everything. It's that spider that if we were actually him, this is exactly what most people would do. The story is extremely realistic with most situations probably happening in people's dreams. Good job to the author.

Awesome. 🤔😁😁😁😁😁😁😃😁😁😃😃😻😀😄😄😄😄😃😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😃😃😃😄😄😀😄😄😄😄😃😃😄😄😃😁😣😣😣😣😣😁🙃😁🙃😁🙃🙃😄😻😆😄😆😃😁😁😃😄😄😀😆😃😃

I like the story a lot so far. If only the release rate was higher. Writing Quality: 3 stars There is not much problems with the writing quality. Not much grammatically errors, punctuations, etc. easy to read and understand without having to take a second look. Stability of Updating: 2 stars Like I said before, the story only has 9 chapters so far, and I love all of them. However, it’s been stuck on chapter 9 for awhile now with no updates. Story development: 4 stars The story is pretty much just starting and not many major changes have occurred yet, but I like the pace and way the author writes. Nothing overly complicated. Relatable. Character design: 3 stars Most of the character design and developments are from the original source from somewhere. Except for MJ being more of a B, and Tony being much younger. World background: 4 stars The surroundings, feelings, senses, and overall happenings are explained pretty well. The world itself is from original source so not much to say about that. I recommend this novel to everyone. I just hope the author doesn’t drop it. Sincerely, HaremQueen.

Good story, other than slow updates there isn't really anything to complain about. Hope to see the story continue unlike most which post 5-20 chapters then get dropped.

This is a really good Spider-Man marvel fan fiction. The thing that really makes this Spider-Man fan fiction stand out is that its Spider-Man if he got reality check. The story is much more realistic.

I liked it, too bad there aren't more chapters