Item: Good Gone Bad
Rating: 4.8
Author: TaintedMetal

TaintedMetalLv24yr

2020-09-17 12:34

So far this is a good read. Sentences flow nicely and the emotion is there among the characters through their interactions and the events that happen to them. The protagonist is a well rounded character who is also written nicely. I would like to see more of the description of places in depth but this is overall every other aspect including the story and characters is interesting. Keep on writing!

Good Gone Bad

ReinaRay729

4.9

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Hey Readers!! Author here of ‘Good Gone Bad’, I hope everyone is enjoying my book and I’d love to hear everyones opnions! Critisicm will only help with growth and help me learn to be better. So please dont hesitate to leave a reivew good or bad. Have a blessed everyone!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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It's a one chapter story. Though it's short, it's a good straight up story. It's a one person's POV, so I am not going to say it's bad just because it's not a 300-page novel. It's like a memoir of a person and it has been written well. Good read.

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The description is really good and vivid. I think you can write quite well so keep on writing and update soon. Looking forward to it. ............. .........

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Another absolutely amazing story from a extremely talented author! Once again left me wanting even more! Would definitely recommend to a friend or family member! Outstanding!

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Fantastically addressed story by an extremely skilled youthful author, for a one chapter story I must say the development of the story was excellent! I would profoundly recommend anyone looking for a story to read this! I would also enjoy reading more from the author.

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The story is well written the characters are well introduced honestly it's a great story! Definitely something you should read when you want something new! Applause to the author!

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TEN out of TEN! Author, you did a great job. In the first chapter, i'm happppi then the next, I'm in tears because immm hurt. :(((( I'm sad for Rachel. and oh btw, I ammm so Rachel. She is my fave character here. Keep writinggggggg

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