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Review Detail of Wolfrunner in Reincarnated as the Chosen One

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Wolfrunner
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Disclaimer: this review is written at chapter 24 and if this story continues on I will update it. So I really like this story but I just have few things that bug me however none of it is a deal breaker. First a system just shows up out of nowhere around chapter 3 and there is no explanation as to what it does or has. Systems in and of themselves are not bad things and are a staple of fan fics and reincarnation stories it's just the reader is usually told about them upfront. Second and this is just a personal thing but when a story jumps povs really often I tend to lose track of what's happening and this story has a bunch of pov changes I think chapter 2 had about three. Like I said these are just a few things that bug me but none of it is a deal breaker as I rather like the story so far and enjoy how the author shows the main character interacting with his Pokemon. There is potential for good humor and I really liked the truck-kun joke in the first chapter. I really hope this keeps getting updated as it's the best Pokemon fan fiction I've read so far and author I know you mentioned that you want to think about where the story is going in the last update you posted and I just want to tell you not to worry too much about it and even if you just follow the game plot while you decide on where to take the story just have fun with it and I hope to be able to read more.

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Reincarnated as the Chosen One

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