It is quite good… (Unless the author decides to drop it) ... Although this story is still quite slow in the beginning, if this work continues like it has until this point, it will surely become quite enjoyable. The author is trying to make a combination of both the anime and videogames. (Maybe even the manga?... I don’t know…) I think is a good idea; there are quite a lot of opportunities for character development, comedy and action. Although there are some strange decisions made by the author… It has to be expected; This is a fanfiction after all… … Something to keep in mind, is that this should still be quite awkward to write for the author. He said it himself: “Well, as you can see English is not my first language and I'm writing this fanfiction so I can improve it while making something funny.” So you could take this story a lot more easygoing. At least, compared to more serious works… …
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