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Discord: https://discord.gg/3sUErnP Twitter: @Awespec https://***.patreon.com/Awespec Hey guys, I thought I'd finally write a review of myself. I gave Focus a 5/5 in everything but writing quality. It isn't that I make any major errors, but it seems like I can never re-read through a chapter I've uploaded without wanting to pull my hair out because I made a typo here, or spelt something wrong there. But! if you can forgive an author for constantly spelling dao, doa, I'm sure Focus will be something you enjoy for a long time to come! Aside from my mistakes, Focus has a lot of strengths. I believe the world and lore are all very interesting. There are countless clans and sects, and each has a unique history with each other that pushes the story forward. In terms of character development, Dyon is as straight forward as you can get, but it's clear he himself has some demons he's burying deep within himself. I also try to give every important character a unique backstory of note that explains their motivations and personality. For stability of uploads, that's something you never have to worry about :) I've been uploading at least 2 chapters a day for the better part of a month now, and the only times I uploaded a single chapter was back when I didn't split my 4000 word chapters in multiple parts. You'll have something to come back to enjoy everyday :) As for the story itself, the second volume will speak for itself. The first was an introductory arc, where we introduce the mc, who he is, his back story, and his first female companion. The second, however, truly delves into the lore of the Focus verse. We have mystery, backstabbing, and plenty of face slapping. I hope you'll all enjoy Focus as much as I enjoy writing it everyday! :)
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I love this novel, with a passion. But for now, I hate you with a passion that rivals a burning star. Do you want to know why? I'll tell you, it's because of jade. Of all the female characters you introduced I was most invested in her, because of how well you crafted her. And then you went and raised my hopes us that she and Dyon would be together, only for you to turn one of your most amazing characters into a demented *****. You're a monster! But good job anyway. But you're still a monster 😭😭😭😭
llmmaaoo, you should tag that as a spoiler... that's too big of a reveal to just leave out there Glad youre enjoying aside from the pain! :)
Anone:I love this novel, with a passion. But for now, I hate you with a passion that rivals a burning star. Do you want to know why? I'll tell you, it's because of jade. Of all the female characters you introduced I was most invested in her, because of how well you crafted her. And then you went and raised my hopes us that she and Dyon would be together, only for you to turn one of your most amazing characters into a demented *****. You're a monster! But good job anyway. But you're still a monster 😭😭😭😭
Sorry, but my heart really hurt! I absolutely loved her character out of all the other females, because she seemed like someone who was facing her own pain, yet willing to face the world for family and love. The change was just to drastic, annoying, and totally unrealistic. I believed she really did make a connection with Dyon and loved him in some form. Heck I though you were going to say she was under some sort of control like meiying. Though a story of her redemption is something I'll totally like to write. Have her turned away, left broken, alone and have her struggle for revenge. Experiencing things that makes her stronger until she gives it up for love. Have all so powerful, but fall in love with an ordinary human, from the mortal realm. Then have her fight everybody, Dyon included to keep her love safe. She's never going to stop being the bad guy, but I would make her an antihero of sorts. But who knows, this is just a fan's last grab at straws. She makes for an incredibly complex and dark character, as opposed to your other 'oh Dyon is so handsome I'll drop my pantries for him whenever he smiles.' Female leads. But you're the writer. All I can say is you've broken her down, taken everything. So pick her up, and make her strong or it wouldn’t mean anything. I admire your commitment, it took my months to get to the length of chapters you've dropped in two months. If course I was dealing with a lot **** in life. Good job
Awespec:llmmaaoo, you should tag that as a spoiler... that's too big of a reveal to just leave out there Glad youre enjoying aside from the pain! :)
***spoilers well, I wouldn't agree about the other FLs. Madeleine spent years thinking her death was inevitable and still played the caring big sister role despite that. And Ri spent years planning to take her kingdom back herself, not waiting for someone else to do it for her. They just both happened to get help from Dyon That aside though, I guess you'll have to stay tuned to see how Jade turns out ;)
Anone:Sorry, but my heart really hurt! I absolutely loved her character out of all the other females, because she seemed like someone who was facing her own pain, yet willing to face the world for family and love. The change was just to drastic, annoying, and totally unrealistic. I believed she really did make a connection with Dyon and loved him in some form. Heck I though you were going to say she was under some sort of control like meiying. Though a story of her redemption is something I'll totally like to write. Have her turned away, left broken, alone and have her struggle for revenge. Experiencing things that makes her stronger until she gives it up for love. Have all so powerful, but fall in love with an ordinary human, from the mortal realm. Then have her fight everybody, Dyon included to keep her love safe. She's never going to stop being the bad guy, but I would make her an antihero of sorts. But who knows, this is just a fan's last grab at straws. She makes for an incredibly complex and dark character, as opposed to your other 'oh Dyon is so handsome I'll drop my pantries for him whenever he smiles.' Female leads. But you're the writer. All I can say is you've broken her down, taken everything. So pick her up, and make her strong or it wouldn’t mean anything. I admire your commitment, it took my months to get to the length of chapters you've dropped in two months. If course I was dealing with a lot **** in life. Good job
I will. I'm really impressed with your writing skills. I wish my work was as well planned and detailed when I first started. If you can please ready novels The two lives of Aaron Wade: The gamer and the heir. Kael Cor: a vampire's Awakening. I would really love your advice.
Awespec:***spoilers well, I wouldn't agree about the other FLs. Madeleine spent years thinking her death was inevitable and still played the caring big sister role despite that. And Ri spent years planning to take her kingdom back herself, not waiting for someone else to do it for her. They just both happened to get help from Dyon That aside though, I guess you'll have to stay tuned to see how Jade turns out ;)
Awespec:llmmaaoo, you should tag that as a spoiler... that's too big of a reveal to just leave out there Glad youre enjoying aside from the pain! :)
spoilers 😁😁 I know what you are feeling but don't count out Jade yet, she plays a big role in future, chapter in web novel. If you want to know go pick up RMW in MoonQuill . I'm not spoiling more then this.🥳🥳🥳
Anone:I love this novel, with a passion. But for now, I hate you with a passion that rivals a burning star. Do you want to know why? I'll tell you, it's because of jade. Of all the female characters you introduced I was most invested in her, because of how well you crafted her. And then you went and raised my hopes us that she and Dyon would be together, only for you to turn one of your most amazing characters into a demented *****. You're a monster! But good job anyway. But you're still a monster 😭😭😭😭
Wit a sec buddy I read RMW in MoonQuill, and I can tell you MC is not a Naruto. so don't drop it so quickly 🤠
Daoist_PotSmoker:hey awespec, sorry man will. be dropping your book. clones are not my thing, I believe they are a waste of time and lazy writing.. . the book is good but, I can't stand clones or books with clones, for me clones make the story go from good too garbage. :/ I'll try re reading this is a fefew years.
I don't know??. but a good story if you stick around that is . it's a slow story and has some mystery element in the story so if you think that there isn't much information, then you guessed it it's a mystery
Ancient_Egyptian:Why is there just 2 tags on your novel?
Hey love the book but think your miSsing some chapters At around page 980 it goes straight from the middle of a fight On One page then right into a conversation On the next Page but you dont know how the fight ended just wondering if thats on purpose or if you skiped a couple pages when you were uploading them
author san could you please tell me when will he be op as he is meant to be. I am around chapter 1100. I find him ridiculously weak given his will and arrogance. there is no balance between power and brain. he keeps on saying that he needs to be powerful but when is he training. there is no time skip no assimilation of knowledge. just keep on jumping from one problem to another. given his talent and intelligence you have pegged him as idiot who doesn't grasp the concept of think before you act. it is this pattern of American shows where there will be 95% of bad things happening and hardly and moment of growth and sustainable one bcoz if he gets his soul strong you seal it and once he will get his body strong you will find him weak again. I guess you want to highlight his winning against all odds but it becomes too repetitive. with so much brain power and with fantasy elements make him op with constant growth. if and when it will change or its going to continue like this bcoz otherwise I would not invest so much of my time as have started to find it repetitive and cliched. on the positive note I like your novel and world building.
from what i see the chapters and prob the book as a whole ilare being deleted, so it prob won't be here after some time
LJREADSNOVELS:hey awepsec what happened to the novel? it suddenly came from 2000+ cpas to 1700+? then some chapters are gone?
