Well this novel is incredible. Also the author addresses us in the author's not on chapter 100. Leave a review he says. Well I will. 1) the author constantly mixes up Dao and Doa. Doa isn't even a thing. 2) this may or may not be harem I don't know. The author is currently undecided. You can tell from his authors notes. 3) there is romance. 4) super mega genius boy for mc. 5) unique concept with some things like formations and alchemy drama. "Oh they split? Are you sure?" (It's a joke) 6) there flipping character development. 7) the author will mix up Dao and Doa some more. 8) the author makes multiple chapters a day. Most of the time. 9) I mean they have a reason to think he's nothing and ridicule him. He's only just arrived there in the world. (Not a spoiler.) Besides some of the characters are very realistic. Ish. For a cultivation novel. Also he discusses this and that at the end of every chapter. 10) seriously this Dao-Doa thing bothers me Ctrl f + replace we talked about this. 11) you can converse with the author. Sometimes. 12) sometimes you have to reread some paragraphs. 13) good worlds building. (Not a mistake. I said worlds.) 14) mysterious background. 15) I'm too lazy to continue.
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LIKEFlashBangMaster:Also I have discussed with the author in the comments the author does intend to say Dao and it's not a choice it's a mistake in their writing.
Earthshaker34:typos huh. well if that's all the mistakes he makes then this novel is indeed amazing
FlashBangMaster:Yup. Chapter 44 I think was the thing where I said that.
Earthshaker34:well, I've read far, far worse translated/written novels so i guess I'm going to be okay :D
yea. when I read a novel with great grammar i become tuned to it and it becomes impossible to read novels with trash grammar :D
FlashBangMaster:I used to have a good sense of Grammer, now I just try to ignore it and I have lost it.
Really I read bad tuned it out now my brain goes well tune it all out. Though I have managed to gain some back.
Earthshaker34:yea. when I read a novel with great grammar i become tuned to it and it becomes impossible to read novels with trash grammar :D
For me i just automatically adapt either way since inhave to read machine translated for most of the novels im reading online. I trained myself well even my sister was amazed at how i could read it like i could lol
Earthshaker34:yea. when I read a novel with great grammar i become tuned to it and it becomes impossible to read novels with trash grammar :D
novel_fanatic:For me i just automatically adapt either way since inhave to read machine translated for most of the novels im reading online. I trained myself well even my sister was amazed at how i could read it like i could lol
novel_fanatic:For me i just automatically adapt either way since inhave to read machine translated for most of the novels im reading online. I trained myself well even my sister was amazed at how i could read it like i could lol
JMelshan the harem fanatic just liked my comment I’d also like to thank DonHit, Astroit, TruthIsntEnough, Chenglei, Giants323, Nib, BrightDawn, Scheming, ImmortalofSpagetti, Grim_Mortem, TheWaifuHunter, GabrielX, StraxyX, Sleepeh, Wangdong, TheBrightOne, Puppychownyc, WebtoonsIsLife, AzureRaven125, BlazingSect and Awespec for liking this review
AraAra:for 2nd, I think you're wrong here or the author, why? because I tried to find the Harem genre from this site and get this novel, the possibility of a Harem is there
TastyRice:I'll start this novel just because your review overtook me and told me to read this. Thanks if it is as good as you say it it. In case it is not up to par... still thanks. Now I gotta take some time to read!
Earthshaker34:yea. when I read a novel with great grammar i become tuned to it and it becomes impossible to read novels with trash grammar :D
LGND:I spent few months on LNMTL I lost my English, Spanish and even my own mother language 😂😂😂
Same, when it was to time to get my passport i couldnt write my own signature thingy... cus i forgot how to write :D
LGND:I spent few months on LNMTL I lost my English, Spanish and even my own mother language 😂😂😂
Earthshaker34:Same, when it was to time to get my passport i couldnt write my own signature thingy... cus i forgot how to write :D
LGND:😂😂😂 You remind of doctors who try to write normally after years of writing prescriptions.