LMFAO, I have no clue why I'm allowed to review a novel that only has two chapters out, but here goes anyways~ Right off the bat, the Writing Quality is superb (better English than 90% of the Original novels I've read. Its like High School Level English or University Level (I don't know the difference between them; help?)). 5 stars Story Development is pretty hard to gauge after only reading two chapters, but with only these two chapters, I've already added the novel to my library and am eagerly waiting for moar chapos to descend! Love the start so here's 5 stars! Stability of updates? He (Or she, I don't know the author's ***?) posted the first two chapters at the same time, so... 5 stars (lol) Character Design: Haven't seen too many Characters but those that have been introduced have a solid description of them, either through flat out descriptions — which I have to admit, are crisp AF (nicely done, good sir (or madam)) — or their through the dialogue, which isn't at all robotic or akin to droning. Boom! 5 stars~ World Background: Sh!t... the synopsis is all that I need to know that some crazy events are bound to unfold. It literally says "devastating inter-dimensional battles," so I for one, am down to stick around for long enough to witness these battles. Would give more stars, but 5 is the limit... And there's my review~ I might change it in the future as, it still remains a mystery to me how I'm allowed to do this with so little information. But for now at least, this is my opinion on the novel, so please don't change it...👌😂👌
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LIKEI don't think that really counts as tragedy, yeah Ava got raped, but, and I know this sounds insensitive, she was just a friend, and at least she is still alive and got revenge
Empty_Shell:It has tragedy. Ava gets raped and blah blah blah, MC's fiancé's fight in arena during match. So on and ****. The arena match was gonna start in about 20/30 chaps but I jumped to 374 and we were still in arena match battles.