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webnovelusername29
webnovelusername29Lv36yr
2019-01-05 01:14

No offense ha..sugestion lang tong akin na sana nilaliman mo yong mga tagalog words para kuha niya talaga yung pag ka historical fiction nong novel. Ok na sana yung unang mga words kaso sumonod yung "mountain villa" at "nag eecho" ide na mamawala yung mood ng reader na mag basa kasi tagalog siya pagkatapos mag iinsert ka ng english in a modern way (taglish). ok rin naman namay english kaso sana gina mo syang whole sentence ir half na lang para hindi sya cliffhanger... Sana wag kang magalit suggestion ko lang to kasi Black bellied miss is actually one of my most favorite novel thats why i want everyone to experience this novel in a best way they can read it if they are not comfortable to read english... So please hear my suggestion.

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shorted
shortedLv3

Sana buo an kwento nito

shorted
shortedLv3

Sana buo an kwento nito

rossanramos
rossanramosLv11

I prefer english.why?kase pag Tagalog n ,Ang layo n s original n kwento..this is one of my favorite novel...wish q lng Sana mag release kayo with English.

ladySpika
ladySpikaLv10

Ang ganda ng novel na to,hindi n nga,ako makatulog eh,gusto gusto ko ung lahat character,interesting tlga,firsttime ko nga bumili ngload,para dito,grabeer kinikilig tlga😂😂😂

raizenrey
raizenreyLv5

Hmm

Jurgina_Ningge
Jurgina_NinggeLv3

I agree

Jurgina_Ningge
Jurgina_NinggeLv3

I agree

callangan
callanganLv5

Yahhh!! Right

VE_N_US
VE_N_USLv4

Mao man

Binibiningninya
BinibiningninyaLv2

good

Binibiningninya
BinibiningninyaLv2

good

Daoist119171
Daoist119171Lv3

Ryt👍

Daoist119171
Daoist119171Lv3

Ryt👍

Daoist119171
Daoist119171Lv3

Ryt👍

BernieAguirre
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Wow

BernieAguirre
BernieAguirreLv13

Wow

Herminia_Sabido
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ha no offense grabe nato

Herminia_Sabido
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ha no offense grabe nato

Daoist392877
Daoist392877Lv2

Agree

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