Review Detail of demon_cook in RWBY: A Man With A System

I love this story it is probably the best RWBY fan fic I have read but as everything it has it's flaws first is the Grammer although it gets better in the beginning it a bit rough second the character development is slow in the beginning which causes the MC to be a little flat but it also gets better now that I am done with the cons the pros of this book are that the the author is very active and trys to make it better for everyone another pro is that he definitely loves and is knowledgeable about the show and knows how characters will react and the store for the most part is like the original but in the places that it changed it is well done and thought out. Ps. thanks for writing this book it is a joy to read keep up the good work.