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Review Detail of WPOmega in RWBY: A Man With A System

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WPOmega
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I never know how to review something besides saying that I like it, although sometimes I just spew out the random that is flowing around in my head. With that said we need an anime style harem where nothing actually happens in the beginning (that can be changed later) including the team RWBY (and one original character) in my opinion. That sounds good, other than that keep doing what you are doing. With less grammar mistakes, cause I think what you mean is vitality and not witality but maybe I am wrong.

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RWBY: A Man With A System

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Glace
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Yes i will try my best to fix the grammar. :)

Oleem
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The grammar gave me cancer. Plz fix it! I can't get past the first few chapters without getting a nose bleed

Glace:Yes i will try my best to fix the grammar. :)