Review Detail of Forsaken1 in Captain Raven
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Writing Quality, it turns out Raven is not a talking bird... It is a bit abnormal to have a female name, as a male MC... 1 Capital letter in his first chapter! no not lying its true. He has more capital letters in his review than his first chapter... Writing Quality, it turns out Raven is not a talking bird... It is a bit abnormal to have a female name, as a male MC... 1 Capital letter in his first chapter! no not lying its true. He has more capital letters in his review than his first chapter................. Stability of updates, sense the novel has just started, no comment. but sense each chapter is about 300-500? words and he wrote 6 total 2/3 chapters a week? that is extremely slow.... story development.. It might be there, but I cant really understand what im reading, so you get a 3 Character design... I thought your MC was a talking bird, somehow you made him less interesting to me... two poor kids, which no goal or objective, its pretty empty---- I made the same mistake. World Background-- its a bit to early and his chapters are too small. id give him a 4 sense, I see signs of it being thought out.
Captain Raven
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Raven is old high german, latinised variant from hraban or rabanus. Raven is a uni *** name, but yeah in English the female form, its stemming from the word "raven". Im from austria so it makes sense, his name is old high German, his name is meaningful. Did you read the first aux chapter? Bc i already said, im a handicapped person so of course i do mistakes, chapter release again im a handicapped person, it takes time to write one chapter, but thanks for the review.
I am sorry, that your handicapped, and I'm sorry that wont affect my judgement of your novel, this is a not a viko96 review, this is a review of what you wrote, I hope you can understand that... If, you want to write something as a form as 100% enjoyment, I would just write without any concern, I have done this, I have made a troll novel! As for the name Raven, perhaps I am uneducated, but I think writing in a way that the most people can understand you is best. I personally think that only Chinese and English, should be used on web-novel, due to the nature of the website. If, the name Raven is important to the novel, I would do a better job explaining that in the novel. I do not understand what type of handicap, you have, but that just means you have to work harder to make of for whatever it is you lack. Personally, my hands are fine, and I still find it a pain to add capital letters; go back and add the best grammar, that I can, but that is just a fraction of the effort someone like you would have to make. if i just write quicly and do not edit it would end up lie trash do you even understand what i am typing?
viko96:Raven is old high german, latinised variant from hraban or rabanus. Raven is a uni *** name, but yeah in English the female form, its stemming from the word "raven". Im from austria so it makes sense, his name is old high German, his name is meaningful. Did you read the first aux chapter? Bc i already said, im a handicapped person so of course i do mistakes, chapter release again im a handicapped person, it takes time to write one chapter, but thanks for the review.