Review Detail of draghnov in passing through the multiverse

I'm at chapter 18 (and it's the max chapter at the time I write this review so all I will speak is for those 18 chapters) Writing Quality : 1/5 Machine Translator, lots of spelling mistakes and in the names (pirate king Gold D. Rojer / PIRATES ATTACK LOBBY ENIES), some sentences lack words (Who are you to judge me, who do you think to speak in that tone with me?), some words are replaced by others ("KNOW BEFORE ME, THE KING." In the situation it should be KNEEL), author alternates between words for the same thing (vice adrmiral / sailors<->basically all marines could be replace by sailors, skill internal space / skill inner space / Storage), lots of paradox (a new criminal who appeared 18 years ago) and the author is unreliable (I don't know where I should put it so it will be said several times) Stability of updates : 5/5 In 5 days, 18 chapters. Just have to see if author will keep he speed realize or not. Story development : 1/5 As of now there was not. MC is reborn (after meeting god) so it's timeskip with what improves with the MC and a little of what is in the present before timeskip again (normal) but just after the MC starts his adventure .... BAM timeskip of 18 years. (author started the story before luffy's birth but he wanted his MC to see Luffy in his adventure so Adios MC advanture of the past 18 years because author absolutely wanted his MC to see Luffy) So after 18 chapters we basically have nothing XD Character Design : 2/5 We basically only have characters presentations but it's superficial (name, a little of backgound and a very very little of their abilities). And after the timeskip OF 18 YEARS the MC only increase his mastery but don't obtain other skills. He has a system who gave quest with SP as reward and he can buy anything he wants with SP (he even gain a ton of them by doing achievements) And do you remember the unreliable author-thing I wrote earlier? here is an exemple: At a certain moment MC fall in a coma here is a skill before coma -> use and manufacture of poisons (advanced) now the skill after coma -> poison manufacturing (master) So was he an advance poison user or a master poison user we don't know (it was before timeskip) Oh and Sengoku the great stategist is ... is ... senile He don't seem to know the MC who is an infamous person with more than a billion berry on his head since he asked a complete report to be made on him and he only understand in that meeting that the ''he must already be at the level of an Admiral'' World Background : 2/5 The author started the story before Luffy's birth so he could have done quite a lot of things but NO, the timeskip made up for the need of World Background since it's not in the middle of Luffy adventure. And like the Story Development said, it's the Character Design who is privileged by the author so even before the timeskip there wasn't really anything (an unnamed island in Calm Belt and the name of a kingdom + architectural style of this one) Author pick skills and items for his MC in other manga / novel but he didn't verify their names so we have these horrors (even those of One Piece are modified): His weaponry haki the king haki Clones of the shadows (NARUTO Shadow Clone Jutsu) Flight of the God of Thunder (NARUTO Flying Thunder God Jutsu) Painting of Ten Thousand Rivers and Mountains (TODAG Myriad Miles Rivers and Mountains Painting) ....