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Review Detail of Neokarasu in Rebirth Of The Urban Immortal Cultivator

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Neokarasu
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The story is basically TDG but set in the modern time. It's not an exact copy but draws a lot of inspiration from it. My biggest complain is probably the pacing. It goes though the story really fast and doesn't let the readers savor moments in the stories because a new scene is already happening on the next page. I guess that's good for fitting in as much story as possible in fewer pages but also makes it feel lacking in depth. The story itself is predictable and isn't really exploring anything groundbreaking so far. The most interesting thing about it is that it's set in the modern world so I wonder how long that novelty can hold up. The MC is a bit too arrogant for no reason but it seems pretty par for the course for these type of stories. The side characters fall into either antagonistic characters who gets wowed by the MC and then falls in line/die or characters that I would call "reaction faces" whose sole purpose is to show how great the MC is/fawn over him. Again, par for the course for these type of stories. Art-wise, the characters have pretty generic anime faces and there isn't really any distinctive quality to the martial arts. The artist also has issues depicting good action scenes with fights looking like a series of poses rather than being fluid. Even with the above criticism, I did read through all of the currently available chapters because this type of story is my guilty pleasure. So if you do enjoy an OP MC face-slapping and wrecking everyone, give this a read.

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Rebirth Of The Urban Immortal Cultivator

DaXingDaoDongMan

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Daoist884094
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yes thats right

Steven_Rajkumar
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goog

Towel
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I mean his arrogance does have reason since he was literally the strongest immortal in his previous life. As Muhammad Ali once said "Its not bragging if you can back it up."

Donce
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It is not TDG it is Returning from the Immortal World. Here are novel and Manga of Returning from the Immortal World . So at start I was thinking it is manga of Returning from the Immortal World , but I found original manga of it. So it is copy. Going really fast is problem of all manga. If first you read novel and later manga, manga will always look really fast. Because of it I like novels more.

rhavnuvi
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Yeah

Ni_C
Ni_CLv4Ni_C

Ok

chiwa_king
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Dope

tifawa04
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I was surprised to see the MC to be continuously arranging. I would think time and experience would humble a person. It’d be nice to see more depth of the character. I enjoy learning about the martial art history and different techniques but character development can be worked on. :)

Sylvain_Gasnier
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Ok

wetpaks02
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n ice

Sylvain_Gasnier
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Very

snoobe18
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Y

Daoist884094:yes thats right
snoobe18
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Y

Daoist884094:yes thats right
JiaYu56211042
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Of course

JiaYu56211042
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Ok

slickkkkkk
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Ya what hesaid

Andrew_Le_8116
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What is TDG? Thanks

Neokarasu
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Tales of Demons and Gods

Andrew_Le_8116:What is TDG? Thanks
JiaYu56211042
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👮🏻‍♀️

Prajwal_Hegde
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