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2018-11-26 12:45

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(Written in the Translator) (Many words will be wrong because of that) Since nobody has the courage to give a real grade for this work, let alone give a real criticism to the Author, then I do it myself. This work so far is total rubbish. The reason? Well, to start: - The Protagonist in the first chapters, spoke about his past to the Readers; that he was tortured from 7 to 13 years old (his current age), cannibalized by his own 'family', tortured, forced to eat a lot of things, he felt extreme pain daily and so on. Okay, this is a heavy and 'interesting' story, but ... Author, do you have any shit in your head? Even with all this history, the Protagonist trusts anyone extremely easily, and overcomes it after a simple dialogue of something he does not know not even a month ago: 'I will not betray you', and there, he cries , starts to trust the person, wants to help him as if his life depends on it and others. This point alone is enough for this work (which I am currently calling Garbage) to receive 2 stars, but there is still more to come! - The protagonist is humiliated daily by the people he trusts and does nothing about. He said that he wanted to separate to have a journey alone, and Delia refused (Delia replaced Ash in this World), and after she said 2 more times: 'I want to go with you', the MC accepted and she even called him 'Dog that barks but doesn't bite'. That is, he just offended directly that he has no courage to fight back or anything like that. That alone is enough to make me want Delia to die in the worst possible way. She who is going after him desperately, and is still offending him and paying himself superior. This other criticism makes the work have 1 star (if possible, 0 stars), at the same time. And now the final criticism. - His system is total rubbish! He has a horrible personality, that just like Delia makes fun of the Protagonist, who has a totally broken mind, does things without the Protagonist's permission (Almost everything that happened until the Moment of Bad, it's the System's fault to do things as wrong as possible). The system doesn't even help him to control the strength he gains. This is total waste. And here's the last review, if it were possible to give '-5 stars' as a grade, I would easily give it. I don't understand how there are so many 5 Star reviews here. Here is my criticism, author, I hope you finally realize the crap you made. (I challenge you to delete this review for no reason, I will come back with an even bigger review)

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