I like the overall theme of this story. I just wish that it had been fleshed out more. Most stories at this point are somewhere between two and three hundred chapters while this one is is less than 50. Hopefully the author sees this and expands on the world background and character building especially in the early chapters. Overall a great story but poor depth and development.
Drunkendaoist
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LIKEIt's way easier to fix / refine a new story instead of old one, i have seen a lot of authors drop their stories and make new ones because it's way easier than fixing the old one, some tried to fix it but most of them gave up later on.
Drunkendaoist:I appreciate the review like i said earlier I started writing this three weeks ago now if im not mistaken at max a month, I write based on the number of powerstones I get but I also have other stories I have to update
War_X_Lord:It's way easier to fix / refine a new story instead of old one, i have seen a lot of authors drop their stories and make new ones because it's way easier than fixing the old one, some tried to fix it but most of them gave up later on.
bud dont take this the wrong way but your not entirely reliable when you give two star review while only reading three chapters. if you dared to read further more was explained.
War_X_Lord:It's way easier to fix / refine a new story instead of old one, i have seen a lot of authors drop their stories and make new ones because it's way easier than fixing the old one, some tried to fix it but most of them gave up later on.
Drunkendaoist:bud dont take this the wrong way but your not entirely reliable when you give two star review while only reading three chapters. if you dared to read further more was explained.
SPOILER... he got destroyed by the elvs got saved by the dark mage after that he trained him then got him in the hunger games and later on two girls got cut up
Drunkendaoist:bud dont take this the wrong way but your not entirely reliable when you give two star review while only reading three chapters. if you dared to read further more was explained.