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nick080894
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I like the overall theme of this story. I just wish that it had been fleshed out more. Most stories at this point are somewhere between two and three hundred chapters while this one is is less than 50. Hopefully the author sees this and expands on the world background and character building especially in the early chapters. Overall a great story but poor depth and development.

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The System of a Vampire

Drunkendaoist

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Drunkendaoist
DrunkendaoistAuthorDrunkendaoist

its literally three weeks old

Drunkendaoist
DrunkendaoistAuthorDrunkendaoist

I appreciate the review like i said earlier I started writing this three weeks ago now if im not mistaken at max a month, I write based on the number of powerstones I get but I also have other stories I have to update

War_X_Lord
War_X_LordLv5War_X_Lord

It's way easier to fix / refine a new story instead of old one, i have seen a lot of authors drop their stories and make new ones because it's way easier than fixing the old one, some tried to fix it but most of them gave up later on.

Drunkendaoist:I appreciate the review like i said earlier I started writing this three weeks ago now if im not mistaken at max a month, I write based on the number of powerstones I get but I also have other stories I have to update
Drunkendaoist
DrunkendaoistAuthorDrunkendaoist

even better if you read pass chapter 3

War_X_Lord:It's way easier to fix / refine a new story instead of old one, i have seen a lot of authors drop their stories and make new ones because it's way easier than fixing the old one, some tried to fix it but most of them gave up later on.
Drunkendaoist
DrunkendaoistAuthorDrunkendaoist

bud dont take this the wrong way but your not entirely reliable when you give two star review while only reading three chapters. if you dared to read further more was explained.

War_X_Lord:It's way easier to fix / refine a new story instead of old one, i have seen a lot of authors drop their stories and make new ones because it's way easier than fixing the old one, some tried to fix it but most of them gave up later on.
War_X_Lord
War_X_LordLv5War_X_Lord

I have read to the last chapter available

Drunkendaoist:bud dont take this the wrong way but your not entirely reliable when you give two star review while only reading three chapters. if you dared to read further more was explained.
War_X_Lord
War_X_LordLv5War_X_Lord

SPOILER... he got destroyed by the elvs got saved by the dark mage after that he trained him then got him in the hunger games and later on two girls got cut up

Drunkendaoist:bud dont take this the wrong way but your not entirely reliable when you give two star review while only reading three chapters. if you dared to read further more was explained.
Melshan
MelshanLv7Melshan

The MC Will have a girlfriend or Harém? 😍😍

Drunkendaoist:its literally three weeks old