clearly this story has the It factor, maybe just too much description, im not the best author but i try my best. Im assuming the author is genuine and is trying there best. be open minded to fully read it. My only insight for you would be to make something different about the character so people can say wow this is different, maybe I've read to many books? Great job! (^=^)/
MedusaDiva
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LIKEMedusaDiva:Yeah but the thing is it always is like that story developement and somehow always they will have some connections i get the feeling of having read to many books as well
MedusaDiva:Thank you it's still ongoing don't let my novel die here Xdddd๐๐๐๐
DragonKnight531:Whenever i have time ill try to see how its going, im writing too remember!! XD
DragonKnight531:Whenever i have time ill try to see how its going, im writing too remember!! XD
MedusaDiva:I mean you said overall was๐๐๐ my novel died thanks to u๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ XD