Review Detail of Forsaken1 in Uncrowned Queen

I, was asked to do this by the author, and encouraged by Zhen_xin I'm mostly going to judge on how this novel makes me feel. The, MC is a pretty princess, so naturally she wants to get away from the pretty castle. The problem is she, seemingly has no skills that let her survive outside the caste... this sounds like the plot to a H novel. I, do not know the target audience here, but I just cannot connect to this MC, and this could of easily changed, if you had told me she was an ugly kindhearted princess who was bullied in the castle so she decided to escape, to be free of her torment. The MC, is the core of the novel, one you should aspire to be, or understand, so far my impression is dumb spoiled pretty girl, sounds like someone who I would just avoid... Story development? I, guess its there, but it lacks soul the happy moments the sad moments are just bland, MC was tossed in a cell. theirs no tears no sadness no sense of rebellion just ok! ill walk there... even if the MC says im sorry you where right... World-Background, none given- all that is know so far is there is a magic castle. is combat with swords or magic? Don't know again its early.. Character Design- It is a bit early, but so far its all cookie cutter, there are signs of a possible interesting person, but I do not have hope at this point, sense the MC was a failure. Grammar, the truth is this is the most important part of writing, but at this point the author is working with rusted tools.