The novel is pretty good so fr. The MC has an interesting background and seeing the interactions she has with other characters really is kind of nice. There are some problems with capitalization and in some areas of the novel words would be switched up in a sentence. For example instead of having something like “I like pigs” we get “i pigs like” This is nowhere in the novel, this is just an example that I came up with. This doesn’t really affect the overall quality of the story, but I have to mention this since this is a review. There are not enough chapters for me to judge how the update stability is yet and as for the character designs, it recieved an A+. There is not much development in the plot as this is still early on but from what I’ve read so far, I can genuinely say that I look forward to future updates. Keep up the good work author and good luck!
MedusaDiva
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LIKEThank you very much i am a newbie and this review helps me a lot thank you very much for you having read it i will try to get the new update finished today yet i might just be able to finish it by tomorrow thank you very much for having take your time i hope you will still enjoy this authors series in the future
MedusaDiva:Thank you very much i am a newbie and this review helps me a lot thank you very much for you having read it i will try to get the new update finished today yet i might just be able to finish it by tomorrow thank you very much for having take your time i hope you will still enjoy this authors series in the future
That’s good then, that means you’ve noticed mistakes that I missed. This way you could tell both Medusa and me what we didn’t notice and help us both improve ourselves. Reviews aren’t meant to always be kind, they are meant to be helpful and suggestive in a way
Forsaken1:Zhen_ you make me feel bad I just, went full brutal mode on her. =[ Good luck medusa!
Forsaken1:Zhen_ you make me feel bad I just, went full brutal mode on her. =[ Good luck medusa!