'Private opinion' 'I never read cannon' I don't see why people like original story they cultivate in modern times and have massager what so amazing I can't see so far. In this story however I can see you try to create better mc which you accomplish in 47% for my taste he is still pussy. You focus like 60% story plot explaining his powers and why is he so OP and how he can become more powerful which for me I skipable part so you leave me with 15% messenger chat which I don't understand and skip as well I don't know these people and don't give a single **** about them so why bother reading theirs ****. Next 15% some Revenge/Slaughter of people I don't know because I skip chat and his powers explanation so I skip that as well. And last part 10% his relationships and interaction with female which is interesting but to damn little to keep me reading this story. GL HF in future.
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