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YesorNo
YesorNoLv55yrYesorNo

First of all, writing quality and update stability gets full marks. Now, story, character and world are terrible. As a fanfic of CCG, I expect the comedy, the slice of life, the organic character interactions of the original from a fresh perspective. Not this abomination of a power fantasy. Shuhang is OP in the original, but he gets OP over the course of so many chapters and each power-up is accompanied by a lot of trials and tribulations. That makes each one seem hard won. You took my favourite webnovel and turned it into this toxic mess. I read through it all, in the hope that it would improve slightly given enough time. I was willing to be extremely tolerant just so I could have a larger morsel of the world of CCG each day than the original could provide. But this.... this abomination... just no.

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New Life In Cultivation Chat Group

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YesorNo
YesorNoLv5YesorNo

You positively butchered the characters of Soft Feather and 16... I feel like crying.

CrispyNoodle
CrispyNoodleAuthorCrispyNoodle

Of course they wouldn't be the same 🙄 I didn't want to write a complete clone of the original. Plus this was supposed to be an alternate reality of sort where certain things are bound to be different. If you wanted a slice of life cultivation fiction, just go back and read original lmao

YesorNo:You positively butchered the characters of Soft Feather and 16... I feel like crying.
Waifu_Avrora
Waifu_AvroraLv6Waifu_Avrora

Hahaha good job there author, dont tou dare drop this novel

CrispyNoodle:Of course they wouldn't be the same 🙄 I didn't want to write a complete clone of the original. Plus this was supposed to be an alternate reality of sort where certain things are bound to be different. If you wanted a slice of life cultivation fiction, just go back and read original lmao
Kid_Speech
Kid_SpeechLv4Kid_Speech

Right Right!

CrispyNoodle:Of course they wouldn't be the same 🙄 I didn't want to write a complete clone of the original. Plus this was supposed to be an alternate reality of sort where certain things are bound to be different. If you wanted a slice of life cultivation fiction, just go back and read original lmao
ZerefAstral
ZerefAstralLv5ZerefAstral

Have you read warning in INFO. IF YOU DONT WANT THEN READ THE ORIGINAL

YesorNo:You positively butchered the characters of Soft Feather and 16... I feel like crying.
ZerefAstral
ZerefAstralLv5ZerefAstral

He didnt read Warning in Info haha. So boring always slice of life story in original .Good job author changing it

CrispyNoodle:Of course they wouldn't be the same 🙄 I didn't want to write a complete clone of the original. Plus this was supposed to be an alternate reality of sort where certain things are bound to be different. If you wanted a slice of life cultivation fiction, just go back and read original lmao
YesorNo
YesorNoLv5YesorNo

The warning was added after my review.

ZerefAstral:Have you read warning in INFO. IF YOU DONT WANT THEN READ THE ORIGINAL
Millennia
MillenniaLv5Millennia

You were expecting the wrong things from the wrong novel

Waifu_Avrora:Hahaha good job there author, dont tou dare drop this novel
Millennia
MillenniaLv5Millennia

You were expecting the wrong things from the wrong novel

Waifu_Avrora:Hahaha good job there author, dont tou dare drop this novel
Oniichan_Thickskin
Oniichan_ThickskinLv13Oniichan_Thickskin

I don't get it, I don't think Shuhang was that OP in the original Cultivation chat Group, most of the time it was his lucky encounters and the seniors from the chat group that lend a hand. and emphasis on the word "fanfic" what do you think it mean? I don't think there's a point in reading a total copy and paste as demonstrated by a few other novel. and for the expectation of comedy, slice of life, etc, it is there, you just probably too focus on the characters instead of looking at the overall picture. the last note was very rude, calling a novel a "abomination", if I didn't know any better I would likely think that this comment was meant to incite anger instead of leaving anything productive. if you truly wish to see what a "Abomination" of a novel is, I can give you some of the link -.- trust me, it ain't pretty.

YesorNo
YesorNoLv5YesorNo

I started reading CCG the day it was added to lnmtl and have followed it for nearly two and a half years now. There are people in real life I know less about than the characters in that book. That is the power of a well written fiction. It makes you feel for the people in its pages. The emotion I experienced while I read about 16 and Soft Feather turning into simpering fools... it was disgust. So, me calling this fiction an abomination is straight talk from a straight person. I am calling it as I see it. If that makes me rude... so be it. I'd prefer the term vocal though.

Oniichan_Thickskin:I don't get it, I don't think Shuhang was that OP in the original Cultivation chat Group, most of the time it was his lucky encounters and the seniors from the chat group that lend a hand. and emphasis on the word "fanfic" what do you think it mean? I don't think there's a point in reading a total copy and paste as demonstrated by a few other novel. and for the expectation of comedy, slice of life, etc, it is there, you just probably too focus on the characters instead of looking at the overall picture. the last note was very rude, calling a novel a "abomination", if I didn't know any better I would likely think that this comment was meant to incite anger instead of leaving anything productive. if you truly wish to see what a "Abomination" of a novel is, I can give you some of the link -.- trust me, it ain't pretty.
Oniichan_Thickskin
Oniichan_ThickskinLv13Oniichan_Thickskin

If that’s the case then I don’t think you should be reading fanfiction.

YesorNo:I started reading CCG the day it was added to lnmtl and have followed it for nearly two and a half years now. There are people in real life I know less about than the characters in that book. That is the power of a well written fiction. It makes you feel for the people in its pages. The emotion I experienced while I read about 16 and Soft Feather turning into simpering fools... it was disgust. So, me calling this fiction an abomination is straight talk from a straight person. I am calling it as I see it. If that makes me rude... so be it. I'd prefer the term vocal though.
YesorNo
YesorNoLv5YesorNo

You are entitled to your opinion.

Oniichan_Thickskin:If that’s the case then I don’t think you should be reading fanfiction.
GreatOverlord
GreatOverlordLv5GreatOverlord

tho I like this fan fic is there a way to put for slicebof life between some people?

CrispyNoodle:Of course they wouldn't be the same 🙄 I didn't want to write a complete clone of the original. Plus this was supposed to be an alternate reality of sort where certain things are bound to be different. If you wanted a slice of life cultivation fiction, just go back and read original lmao
ePythagoras
ePythagorasLv5ePythagoras

Retard

DeRouge
DeRougeLv5DeRouge

i see you everywhere

Oniichan_Thickskin:I don't get it, I don't think Shuhang was that OP in the original Cultivation chat Group, most of the time it was his lucky encounters and the seniors from the chat group that lend a hand. and emphasis on the word "fanfic" what do you think it mean? I don't think there's a point in reading a total copy and paste as demonstrated by a few other novel. and for the expectation of comedy, slice of life, etc, it is there, you just probably too focus on the characters instead of looking at the overall picture. the last note was very rude, calling a novel a "abomination", if I didn't know any better I would likely think that this comment was meant to incite anger instead of leaving anything productive. if you truly wish to see what a "Abomination" of a novel is, I can give you some of the link -.- trust me, it ain't pretty.
Oniichan_Thickskin
Oniichan_ThickskinLv13Oniichan_Thickskin

Because i am everywhere, i am the law of the universr

DeRouge:i see you everywhere
Oniichan_Thickskin
Oniichan_ThickskinLv13Oniichan_Thickskin

I am omnipresence

DeRouge:i see you everywhere
lxylf
lxylfLv10lxylf

haha common problems of easy wezzy readers doomed to be (so called antagonized) most of the cultured men here xD

Oniichan_Thickskin:I don't get it, I don't think Shuhang was that OP in the original Cultivation chat Group, most of the time it was his lucky encounters and the seniors from the chat group that lend a hand. and emphasis on the word "fanfic" what do you think it mean? I don't think there's a point in reading a total copy and paste as demonstrated by a few other novel. and for the expectation of comedy, slice of life, etc, it is there, you just probably too focus on the characters instead of looking at the overall picture. the last note was very rude, calling a novel a "abomination", if I didn't know any better I would likely think that this comment was meant to incite anger instead of leaving anything productive. if you truly wish to see what a "Abomination" of a novel is, I can give you some of the link -.- trust me, it ain't pretty.
Oniichan_Thickskin
Oniichan_ThickskinLv13Oniichan_Thickskin

Onii-chan is a very cultured person

lxylf:haha common problems of easy wezzy readers doomed to be (so called antagonized) most of the cultured men here xD