First of all, writing quality and update stability gets full marks. Now, story, character and world are terrible. As a fanfic of CCG, I expect the comedy, the slice of life, the organic character interactions of the original from a fresh perspective. Not this abomination of a power fantasy. Shuhang is OP in the original, but he gets OP over the course of so many chapters and each power-up is accompanied by a lot of trials and tribulations. That makes each one seem hard won. You took my favourite webnovel and turned it into this toxic mess. I read through it all, in the hope that it would improve slightly given enough time. I was willing to be extremely tolerant just so I could have a larger morsel of the world of CCG each day than the original could provide. But this.... this abomination... just no.

i give you star hope fast update dont be lazy dude 🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚🚚

Thanks for the chapter. I think they react that way because in fanfiction as you use another story as a template for yours the charcters we as readers if we have an idea of how a carácter is an when is genderbended we don't really know what to expect in particular it doesn't bother me if you choose use one but you have to take into account personality of the carácter and the way you want the story to go, that way you don't make errors or try to change many things and make more difficult to follow the flow of the story.

CCG fanfic? Fvck 5 star ill give 5 star!!!! 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😆😆😆😆😆😀😀😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😀😀😀😀😀 CCG fanfic? Fvck 5 star ill give 5 star!!!! 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😆😆😆😆😆😀😀😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😀😀😀😀😀 CCG fanfic? Fvck 5 star ill give 5 star!!!! 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😆😆😆😆😆😀😀😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😀😀😀😀😀

I've got to say, if you are here for the comedy you've liked in the CCG, you better leave. But, if you really like OP, this one is for you, that I will say, confidently. Overall, 4/5, pretty amazing, and the rest you can find out yourself.

'Private opinion' 'I never read cannon' I don't see why people like original story they cultivate in modern times and have massager what so amazing I can't see so far. In this story however I can see you try to create better mc which you accomplish in 47% for my taste he is still pussy. You focus like 60% story plot explaining his powers and why is he so OP and how he can become more powerful which for me I skipable part so you leave me with 15% messenger chat which I don't understand and skip as well I don't know these people and don't give a single **** about them so why bother reading theirs ****. Next 15% some Revenge/Slaughter of people I don't know because I skip chat and his powers explanation so I skip that as well. And last part 10% his relationships and interaction with female which is interesting but to damn little to keep me reading this story. GL HF in future.

Hari ini saya akan memulai membaca, karena sino**is jelek rate juga jelek heheheh, semoga penulis pemula tidak malas kedepannya. Positive ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++bab1+++++++++

Awesome Fan Fic. Everyone should try it from my view. Please keep the chapters coming.............................................................................

GOOD LUCK ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------___________---------------------- =D

what is this abomination, i lost my braincells after reading this...........................................................................................