Review Detail of _Miyasaka in Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World!
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Overall there isnt much going on in the world around the Mc. We get some conflicts between noble houses but nothing more than that.That's forgivable though as the Mc is still very young (7y atm) and dosnt get in them directly. We also didnt get much info on the nobles, kingdoms, monsters, guilds, magic types, other kinds of techniques etc so for a while, world building is somewhat lacking. The main cast is not too big nor too small. The characters personalities are very straight foward and so is the plot. It is a relaxing reading and the short chapters also contribute to this. On the negative side, I identified a major problem with the title. The Mc actually does not aim to be the best magician. She just sleeps (all the time) and has no motivation to aim to be the best magician or anything in life really. Magic comes naturally to her so it has been a inevitable result instead of a goal so far. Besides that, despite knowing the Mc is OP, she doesnt get barely any action so we dont know how op she is comparing to the world she lives in. This is a essencial if you want to be the best at something. The way her stats seem to actually make no difference is life is worrying but not exactly bad. Mc is able to knock a teacher out in one hit but is unable to push a hugging perv away? Yeah, it makes the scene comical but it is also contradictory. Also WAY TOO MANY PEDOS! Excellent for a casual read but, for now, nothing more than that.
Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World!
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Yeah i get it would take long before we get to that part as we are only starting but I cant see what would motivate Syl to do aim to be the best. She is also apex lazy, so what kind of motivation is strong enough to that? Something from her past life? Nope, she didnt carry over anything like that. (None I could see in the first chapters) Need for power? This goes against the lightheartedness of the chapters so far as something really bad needs to happen so it creates that need. Just want to explore around and see the world? You actually dont need to be the strongest for that and Mc is already strong enough as she is. I dont what other options there are but to get that lazy loli to move, it'll be very difficult
Rianolinon:I can't really start the "aiming to be the best magician in the world" part yet until academy arc is over. I know nothing about world building.
_Miyasaka:Yeah i get it would take long before we get to that part as we are only starting but I cant see what would motivate Syl to do aim to be the best. She is also apex lazy, so what kind of motivation is strong enough to that? Something from her past life? Nope, she didnt carry over anything like that. (None I could see in the first chapters) Need for power? This goes against the lightheartedness of the chapters so far as something really bad needs to happen so it creates that need. Just want to explore around and see the world? You actually dont need to be the strongest for that and Mc is already strong enough as she is. I dont what other options there are but to get that lazy loli to move, it'll be very difficult
Traumatic is the exact opposite of what you have written so far. If you are planning on destroying that fluff fluffy world, I beg you to do it properly to avoid as much damage as possible since I have enjoyed the not-traumatic story so far and plan on keep reading.
Rianolinon:not if something traumatic happens.
_Miyasaka:Traumatic is the exact opposite of what you have written so far. If you are planning on destroying that fluff fluffy world, I beg you to do it properly to avoid as much damage as possible since I have enjoyed the not-traumatic story so far and plan on keep reading.
_Miyasaka:Traumatic is the exact opposite of what you have written so far. If you are planning on destroying that fluff fluffy world, I beg you to do it properly to avoid as much damage as possible since I have enjoyed the not-traumatic story so far and plan on keep reading.