Review Detail of Moepop1 in Kingdom's Assholes [Completed]

Item: Kingdom's Assholes [Completed]
Rating: 1

Review detail

Moepop1Lv145yrMoepop1

Writing Quality is choppy, looks like copy pasted chatlogs. No stability of updates at all. There is no story. The characters are not explained at all. There is no world background or world explanation.

Kingdom's Assholes [Completed]

VanessaNicole

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Rosella213Lv4Rosella213

Have you ever heard of a word called "busy"?

5yr

Moepop1Lv14Moepop1

Yeah I have. Author is too busy to update his novel so there is no stability of updates.

Rosella213:Have you ever heard of a word called "busy"?

5yr

VanessaNicoleAuthorVanessaNicole

Thank you for the review, Yes the writing is choppy, it is copy and paste... there is no stability of updates because it all depends on whether or not the assholes have a ****ty based conversation for me to paste, edit and update. There is NO story because we all have our own novels to write. There are 30+ characters in the Kingdom server who the hell has the time to explain it. And there is a world background in synopsis... Thanks again for the review huehuehue.

5yr

Moepop1Lv14Moepop1

Duly noted.

VanessaNicole:Thank you for the review, Yes the writing is choppy, it is copy and paste... there is no stability of updates because it all depends on whether or not the assholes have a ****ty based conversation for me to paste, edit and update. There is NO story because we all have our own novels to write. There are 30+ characters in the Kingdom server who the hell has the time to explain it. And there is a world background in synopsis... Thanks again for the review huehuehue.

5yr