I like the plot of the story but in my opinion I find 'comma splicing' to be very hard to read. I am in the first parts of the story and according to the other raters,your way of writing seemingly have changed? So i will keep this in my lubrary and continue to read it until I reach the 100+ part of the story hehe. Neverhtless,i am excited!
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