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ian3373
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It's a good story with female lead... I have huge problem with the naming of the techniques in cultivation that very different from the usual names in other novels... The writer use hard words to spell and pronounce... I still not getting used to those names... Other than that I find the story is not bad. Although the narrative is dominated the writing style, not much dialogues... Really those cultivation names give me headaches....:D

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Heart Cultivation

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ian3373, Thanks that you took the time to express your thought, and yes, I have changed the style very much, now adding dialogues as you can see in every new chapter. And for your concern about the terms and names of techniques and so are different because I am working on a fresh idea, not the old one, so these are pretty different. ^ ^ I hope that you'll find this story more interesting in the future.

ian3373
ian3373Lv5ian3373

Tlike the story.. that's why I gave 5 stars.... About those names, if not too troubling, I wish you write a page about them... I mean just a general explanation how many kind are there? Are there ranks? How many ranks? If I'm not mistaken there is a kind that like element (i,e: desert, water, etc) and the kind that have ranks (Contemplation)....

_Sha:ian3373, Thanks that you took the time to express your thought, and yes, I have changed the style very much, now adding dialogues as you can see in every new chapter. And for your concern about the terms and names of techniques and so are different because I am working on a fresh idea, not the old one, so these are pretty different. ^ ^ I hope that you'll find this story more interesting in the future.
ian3373
ian3373Lv5ian3373

And another one that called Evanesce Aptitude... so many kind of techniques..... Keep up the good work....:)

_Sha:ian3373, Thanks that you took the time to express your thought, and yes, I have changed the style very much, now adding dialogues as you can see in every new chapter. And for your concern about the terms and names of techniques and so are different because I am working on a fresh idea, not the old one, so these are pretty different. ^ ^ I hope that you'll find this story more interesting in the future.
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_ShaAuthor_Sha

I have read your concerns, and I have made some suggestions in my chapter 155 comment, you can read it there.